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EXE DESIGN CRITICISM

@DeadmanEXEDC

You can refer to me as Deadman! Offshoot of @EXE_Criticism, I help out with character design! Ran by @Cosm1cBacon

Joined December 2024
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Welcome to the EXE Design Criticism account! information on what this account is for and how to interact is below!
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ITSSS MY BBBIRTHDAAY!! As of, three days ago. Whoops! Happy birthday to me!
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school kicked my ass and then i got art block for like seven months im back pretend im in character i would Enjoy having Characters to Redesign.
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Can we pretend I haven't been having a crisis over whether I should have arms or not. ITS HARD TO ARTICULATE!! ELBOWS!!!
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.............i started school.................
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....I forgot...
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Hey guys! While this account stays a bit dead for at LEAST a week longer (finals), you should join the @EXE_Prompts Discord! Also, if you want any quick one-on-one criticism, talk to me in there, I'm an admin! (i will talk to you in character) discord.gg/9W36zWj3nk
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//WHEW. Sorry for the wait! I've been pretty busy recently with catching up on work + having a HORRID amount of art block. You'll have to wait just a bit longer!!!
EXE DESIGN CRITICISM (@DeadmanEXEDC) profile pictureEXE DESIGN CRITICISM@DeadmanEXEDC23 Mar 2025
Second jumping off point.. I'm still here to give design criticism!!
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Second jumping off point.. I'm still here to give design criticism!!
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Tried to make jester inspirations more obvious, with the spines looking more like a hat and various other little details (my favorite is making the face look more like a mask). Everything else is in the image!
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These are two hard requests for two different reasons.
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I really need to rewrite my submission criteria...
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all of my critique is pretty much in the image!
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added more color! I felt overall they were a bit boring with just the three. added a "chili" aspect as well, and took some inspo from cooking mama with a change in the eyes/hands and color palette (kinda). Since this is supposed to be a cooking assistant, I also tried to make--
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🍓JAMORY JAMORIES🫙 (@SonicSigma70884) profile picture🍓JAMORY JAMORIES🫙@SonicSigma7088417 Feb 2025
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hi Basically, a somewhat lost media flash game where As the updates for the flash game went on, it slowly became more and more disturbing And a cannibalistic, The reason of why they look like a chef is because it's a cooking mama like flash game, [Extra images show how it look]
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them look a bit more friendly with softer spines and a general rounder look.
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minor stuff to change silhouette a bit and relate more to archie sonic. I think its very good already! i also think i could break its arms so that was a preference change (ignore how i said be more original and showed official media)
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mamamiaein (@mamamiaein) profile picturemamamiaein@mamamiaein10 Feb 2025
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Here's teacher The linked tweet is for his ref sheet which contains some of his lore and power His design changed a lil but is essencially the same other than the feet that i changed. He was a bit inspired by those aliens in predator xitter.gq/mamamiaein/status/1853…
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id also make the shoe line a bit thicker
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//owner has been busy speedrunning kapi's rock and roll ..
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Generally, the design doesn't portray that Vista is a genuine threat (He looks so lanky that if he tried to chase you down his limbs would snap). I fixed this by making him more animal-like! specifically based on a cat, he now has the body type and muscle to chase people down. --
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Supercanemagic0099 (@SupERCaneMac) profile pictureSupercanemagic0099@SupERCaneMac12 Feb 2025
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Im too late? Is called vista and this Is the lore continued-exe.fandom.com/wik…
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-- I also thought that he could have a bit more color variation! I honestly don't think I implemented very well, but I did what i could.. Finally, the eye! Simply changed it because I thought I could make it more obviously "the main thing" about him. also made it more obvious--
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TheToombstonePlays (@TThetoomplays) profile pictureTheToombstonePlays@TThetoomplays11 Feb 2025
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Might as well send a strange one. Greedhart is basically a demonic dimension hopper who causes havoc and randomly appears in games to either spook people or to cause mayhem in those games. But he also is a literal cartoon who has escaped his own realm rather.
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I like it! Especially with the limitations of Pulse, you did a pretty good job! Without those limits though, I think it could overall just be "more" to help with silhouette. I exaggerated some of the features a bit, and added some points to make him look a bit more hostile. --
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The24thlettuce (@The24thlettuce) profile pictureThe24thlettuce@The24thlettuce11 Feb 2025
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Monothulu, the seraphim of hate. In short, his task in heaven was to store the world’s hate, but due to not having a way to vent it out, it destroyed him. After committing high treason, he was sent to earth in a body that was not his own that limited him as punishment.
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-- I also thought the face was a bit busy and unstructured, so i changed that on the left! plus I added some red markings/color in general to make it just a bit more interesting/fit better with the "hate" theming. Everything else is minor nitpicking.
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Not many notes, it works perfectly as it supposed to be! My only question is the shadow fur, while I know it's supposed to represent shadows dna as i wrote in the notes how would that actually work ?
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StarFallX (Comms open 5/5) (@Sape_master) profile pictureStarFallX (Comms open 5/5)@Sape_master10 Feb 2025
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Havoc He is a combination of Chaos and Shadow dna made by DR eggman after the events of Sonic heroes in an attempt to mimic his most powerful allies to that date
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Everything else is just ideas to make it more interesting. I also had an idea where they had a shadow quill for the "shadow dna" part but i forgot that!! same kind of idea of it being more like artificial chaos but i only realized that in the middle of me drawing the brain
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Tapping my foot Wednesday is my off day. Sorry I'm busy!! Feel free to keep giving me your characters though
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